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1st chapter in my book demons

Wed Feb 21, 2007, 3:39 PM
Demons
chapter 1
(introduction)
When thorn was born Tom knew that she was, and would be, mischief. Tom was a tall man with hair so dark no one could see the red in it. His eyes were cold and heartless, the color black. Tom was vile and evil. Tom was never happy, even on his wedding day to his beautiful bride, Tainya. Tainya was a radiant beauty, with black hair like a raven's wing. She had, unlike Tom, piercing red eyes that were so beautiful that they could make you go green in envy.


Tom was especially angry when they had their daughter, Thorn. Tom wanted a son and was disapointed to find a girl squaling in their nursery. Tainya,however, was very proud when she saw her healthy newborn baby girl.


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Thorn grew to be a lovely young lady, with pitch black hair and blood red eyes, but the really weird thing about her was she had a mark on her chest that was shaped like two moon cresents crossed together with a small, hot looking flame in the center of the two moon cresents. Thorn also had a black jagged shape under her right eye. Thorn was very mischevious, and had a very excellent voice. One night at about 11:00 Thorn heard a rumbling sound in her parents room. She knew it wasn't an ordinary rumbling sound because after two minutes she heard a very faint shriek, so she ran up the creeky steps to her parents room. When she opened the door she was surprised too find her mother lying motionless on the floor. Her father had said that she had died of heart failure. Now Thorn was a smart girl, but she knew not to question her father.


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A few years later after her mother died, Thorn was sitting on the couch,when she caught the news. Now Thorn didn't like the news, but her fathers face on the news really caught her attention. She found out that he had killed a boy's family. She also learned that her mother had acctually died the same way. Thorn suddenly relized why he wouldn't let her attend her mother's funeral; he murdered Tainya. Thorn then ran away, and knew then that she would never want too see her father again...well... at least for awhile. It's not that she didn't love her father, it was just that she had completely loathed the way her father had lied to her for all these years.


Thorn ran away to another city called Dublin, which was the capital city of Ireland. A girl named Kim allowed her to work at a pet store on Dragonitch Rd. Kim had dirty blond hair and pale blue eyes. She was the sort of person who wouldn't let people do anything without confronting her first. She was tough, fair and kind of nice at times, and once she heard Thorn's story, she thought she just had to let her work there.


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"See 'ya' later Kim," I said. "And just where in the world do you think you're going?" asked Kim. "To school," I retorted. I had finally gotten a full scholarship to Siniclaire High. This was no ordinary school, infact this school was in the center of the earth, and no one could get there if they didn't have "special abilities." "How did you get the money to go there?" Kim asked suspicously and a little to quickly for I am a smart-ass and always will be and when I have an oppurtunity I will be very sharp. "For your information miss jump to conclusion I got a full scholarship to the school i'm going to," I said sticking out my tounge afterwards attempting patheticlly to add sharpness to the remark and failing, and then,without a word, I was gone. "Top 'a' da' mornin' to ye lassie," said an Irish man on the street. "Oh, hi Rick, good morning," I replied panting for breath as I was racing towards the train station.

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Once I got on the crowded train I finally found a seat in a compartment next to two girls who, by the looks of it, were twins, and good god, they would not shut up. I did not know that two girls could talk about make-up so long so I finally shouted,"SHUT UP!" the two girls just stared at me and then looked at eachother and started talking again; I thought to myself, I give up! These girls are worse than the cheerleaders at my old high school, god, those girls were bad. Finally I got off the train and in to the school's courtyard, and it was so hot I thought I just might pass out, but when I got into the school I didn't feel like passing out anymore, in fact it felt as if it were in the middle of Autumn.

"Hi," I said to a boy in the school with purple brown hair and heart piercing silver eyes. "Hi," he replied. "What's your name?" I asked. "Shaun Madore, what's your name?" Shaun questioned back at her. "Thorn Sivy-," I said faltering. "Sivyyyyyyy what?" he asked, prying to know who I was,or,at least, my name. "Thorn Sivylian," I whispered. "wh-," he said oddly faltering and to this I knew not to question his oddness because something about him made me think to shut up. "Why did you decide to come up to Siniclaire High?" Shaun asked curiously changing the subject. "Because first of all, I had nothing better to do," I replied while he snickered,"what?" "Nothing, go on," he said calming himself. "Okay, second of all, I want to find out who I am and what i'm meant to do in this world and lastly," I lowered my voice to a faint whisper," I need to find a way to control my....abilities." "That's great, i'm so happy for you," he said immaturely as if he didn't care, but he did care, more than you can imagine. "So,Shaun, why are you here, smart-ass?" I asked trying greatly to keep my cool. "I'm here because of the same reasons you're here except the last one," he replied with a smart little smirk on his face. "You have issues," I mumbled rolling my eyes. "This is coming from the girl who has nothing better to do!" he said playfully and then suddenly turned serious,"You know I have a third important reason too," and then he,as I did, lowered his voice to a faint whisper,"my parents were murdered and so i'm doing this for them." I gasped realizing at that moment I should have seen it before; he was the boy on the news whos parents were murdered by my father, but all I could say with, almost a tear in my eye, was," I'm sorry." and then we hurried off to our first classes at Siniclaire High.

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  • Listening to: nothing
  • Reading: the stuff i'm typing
  • Watching: the computer screen
  • Playing: mental games!!!!
  • Eating: i'm eating my head
  • Drinking: anger and frustration

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